Strike Two.

Greetings. This is the artistic equivalent of knowingly watching a bad movie all the way to the end because you already sat through the first third. The idea is good but the execution is poor.  The same is true for the preceeding post (La Maxima).  If a drawing isn't working in the pencil stage then don't bother trying to "save it" in the inks. Fix the pencils.  I'm done trying to reinvent the wheel. I really need to absorb my influences instead of merely admiring them.   Time for two do-overs. Stay tuned...